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Do you do anything else?

I like the fact that you make your own music (so do I in Ytown Public). I liked the sound, part from the little kids voice in the beginning. The lines were a bit strange. The man thinks like he's in some sort of a video game, trying to beat the boss. "He has to have a weak point", people don't go around thinking that. I saw this movie three times in a row the day you submitted it. It is the first time I have seen a moive that many times (the same day). The story didn't really evolve at all, that's ok for this time - Just don't make the next episode another full fight episode. And now the grafics, they are very good and at some high points even marvelous. I'm going to start wwith some things that I didn't like. I don't like it when you use stills (of full characters) and motion tween them. My advice is to cut the full characters into different layers so you can slightly (I said SLIGHTLY) rotate or bend the arms and legs and head. If this is done well, you will get the impression of a fully animated animation. I use this techique in Ytown Public. I have many sets of arms and hand for every charater so they don't just rotate them like windmills. You know what I mean? I like the manga effects, the dust when the characters jump and slide and punch. Homour? Well, ok, I guess it is kinda funny when you watch it a couple of times. The first time I was just confused, thinking, what the hell is he doing and what's with the sound?! Bang, bang, bang! Work harder on the mouths - You're lazy if you only use one sort of mouth shape/movement. Did I say this was EXCELLENT?!

arrogancy responds:

I just looked at Y Town. It's weird, but I like the style of it.

I thought about motion tweening the body parts, but it looks really dumb with the way the characters are designed - especially in the next episode. Thus, it's frame by frame for me for this series.

The story evolves a lot in the next episode. And yes, I am quite lazy.

This is sooo wonderful!

Okey... I admit this is not the first time I watch you movie... and holy shit I like more now than I ever did. You're graphics are awsome at some points (like the opening scene) you can't even tell it is flash. Wonderful. And also... this one time... eh... in your movie, when the squirrel (you know the brown thing with swords) wakes up - That scene is super. I know that it takes much time to make a long episode (I'm animating as well, you know), but you REALLY REALLY REALLY should make more, NOW!!!

I have waited long enough! Damn it!

I'm gonna watch it again...

There are so many things going on.. the movie totally rocks your brain!

Your style is at times very basic, like how you draw the house... but the colours you have chosen make it look excellent anyhow.

Great. Now make more. That's an order!!!

fourchinnigan responds:

Thanks. Don't worry, there is a big episode coming before Christmas.

I was the KING OF THE PORTAL in November 2001. I'm very proud! Check out my new series called 'Detective Frofrog'. Don't miss Ytown Public! And now.. NINE YEARS LATER, I have made a game: Princess Defender! Enjoy :)

Marcus Dahlstrom @McRhyme

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Study Engineering

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Ystad, Sweden

Joined on 9/5/01

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